Alyce Elmore’s dystopian suspense novel, When All Hope is Lost, follows the political and social shifts that emerge in a female-dominated society after a widespread catastrophe.
The year 2029 marks the onset of a devastating global pandemic that annihilates the world’s male population within three years. Following the desolation, subsequent male generations don’t survive either; just before reaching their 20th birthdays, they exhibit erratic, dangerous behavior and soon collapse and die. By 2050, women have adjusted to a world devoid of adult males. Many in Australian society now view males as burdens; hence, their rights are restricted.
The story is structured as a 2069 interview conducted by a young, University of Melbourne student as an admissions requirement to its master’s program. The interviewee is an elderly person dubbed the “Old One,” who recounts the events surrounding the pandemic and successive political changes. Frustratingly, the interviewee constantly shifts her focus from one character to another, interrupting the story’s flow.
The novel also features various intriguing characters who try to navigate the post-pandemic era, including friends Karen, Josh, Benny and Zane who are forced onto different paths after the devastation; a political reporter trying to solve several interrelated mysteries; a researcher looking for a cure for the male malady, and key fictional political figures.
Meanwhile, there’s the suspicious death of the Greater Melbourne Republic’s premier; characters determined to fight Australia’s rising fascism and to champion the rights of males; and other intrigue.
Exploring themes regarding political autocracy, equality and human rights, this novel is a thought-provoking read. Its rich descriptions of its social and political settings and its fresh, relatable characters determined to stand up for freedom make it absorbing, as does the tension that builds throughout.
While the Old One’s disjointed storytelling causes reading challenges, science fiction fans will appreciate the story’s original concept, absorbing scenes and engrossing subplots.
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When I first came across the premise of When All Hope is Lost, I must say, I was intrigued, albeit skeptical. After all, I reasoned, the old gender switcharoo has been done to death, especially in recent years, with the progression of egalitarian values in the world.
What I thoroughly enjoyed about this first book in the The Angels Have Tread trilogy was that the author managed to take this somewhat overused idea of women ruling the world, whilst men are reduced to playthings, servants, and of course, breeding apparel, and make it worth reading. That, in itself, is no easy feat. Because if you think about it, every story has been told before, in its more bare form, at least. So to be able to adapt and shape that skeleton of a story, and still make it interesting - now, that's saying something.
I also enjoyed the web of character that Elmore weaves, particularly the complex relationship between Monika and Evelyn. Far more than a mere mentor-apprentice duo, these two ladies enjoy this wonderfully rich and emotional chemistry. Personally, the chapters featuring these two were my favorites, by quite a margin. Zane and Karen probably would've come in second, as far as the characters go.
Speaking of character interactions, though, there was one element of the story that, for me, really brought the whole experience down. Much as I enjoyed the Old One, as a character, her little introductory exchanges at the beginning of each chapter just got on my nerves and stilted the story (I thought). While I think a little introduction would've been nice at key points in the story, the Old One's exaggeratedly suspenseful remarks, along the lines of the knowing "you'll see" were just too much. They made keeping up with the story's progression more difficult - so why do that?
In my opinion, the book, at 120k words, was overly long for what it had to offer. I feel that if the author would've compressed the action into a neat 90k words, then the story would've been much smoother, and more fast-paced.
All of that being said, I thought the final chapter was well-written, and among the strongest in the entire novel. For that, and for the other good aspects I pointed out, I might like to read the second book in the series. But I strongly suggest that you make up your own mind, since books are subjective, and what resonates with you might not resonate with me. And vice-versa.
